We're going to tackle a directed writing together over the next few days.

What should our target be? What do we need to remember?

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We will need to make sure that anything we write makes sense and is actually relevant to what we are writing about.
Our targets could be trying to use the different tenses and to use them correctly and try to make sentences as interesting as possible by mentioning more than one thing and by trying to use as wide a range of adjectives as possible.
Annabel S5

"We need to write in the correct tense and use adjectives and add opinions to make sentences longer and more interesting but keep them relevent to the subject. Joanna "

Here is this week's task - I have started the first bullet point, you should begin to add to what is there, you can change the colour of your sentences so we can see who has added each sentence, you can correct any errors you see - this work should involve everyone so that we help each other.

Last summer you spent a week with your school in Paris. You travelled there by coach and boat. You stayed in a hostel and spent some time sightseeing in Paris, you spent one day in a local school.
Now you have been asked to write an account of your experiences IN FRENCH for inclusion in the foreign languages section of your school magazine.

You must include the following information and you should try to add other relevant details:

„« How you travelled to France and what you did during the journey
„« Who was with you on the trip and how you got on with them
„« What your accommodation was like
„« What you did during the week
„« What you did during the day in school
„« Whether you would recommend such a visit to others

Your account should be 150-180 words in length.





« How you travelled to France and what you did during the journey
L'année dernière je suis allée en France en voyage scolaire.
On a pris le ferry et voiture.
Pendant voyage nous avons regarde films!
Le voyagé était long mais a passé assez vite parce qu'on a regardé un film.
« Who was with you on the trip and how you got on with them
J'etais avec mes amis et de classes.
Quatre professeurs nous ont accompagnés.

« What your accommodation was like
L'auberge se trouvait à cinq minutes de la metro. J'ai partagé une chambre avec mes copains. C'était génial!
« What you did during the week
Pendant le semain nous sommes allee tourisme dans Paris.
On visité la Tour Eiffel et la vue de Paris était super.
Nous avons aussi visité le musée Louvre où nous avons vu la Joconde, mais il y avait trop de monde

« What you did during the day in school

« Whether you would recommend such a visit to others

Je voudrais recommander un voyage escolaire car j'ai amelioré mon francais.